Second Shoot Feedback

• Glass could have a bit of wine in it
• Actor possibly needs to look dead (make-up? open eyes?)
• Show that there's been more of a struggle (move large cushions? torn / stained dress? cracked / broken glass?)

Therefore when we re shoot we will make sure to:

• Concentrate on continuity particularly at the match-on action moments
• Have the right actor and keep his eyes open to make him look dead
• Have less action
• Pace could be better?