25/01 -Teacher Feedback

As we explained our idea to our teacher, it became clear that our idea was too complicated. So we considered omitting the party element of the narrative and to reveal the body sooner to the audience. We also decided to discuss what the relationship between the girl and deceased boyfriend would be. We decided to answer the following in our meeting:

• Should the narrative occur after a party?
• Should the body be revealed to the audience sooner than the last shot?
• How much will the girl acknowledge the body?